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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 05:03 PM
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Ok Keo suggested I draw some stuff for EF4 and I wanted to know what you guys think?

Heres my Deviant art account http://flaming-pencil.deviantart.com/

And here are my best drawings as of August 7th '09
I started seriously at the beginning of September '08 But I always was for of drawing.
In order of my personal favourites.
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If they are too big just tell me and I'll put links instead.
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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 06:53 PM
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Nice, I dont know how good manga drawings are on the comp, so I didnt vote, but there good smile.gif
I like the 1st and the 2nd one


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can a pizza get to your house faster than an ambulance.
do banks have both doors open and then chain the pens to the counters.
do they have drive-up ATM machines with Braile lettering.
do people order double cheese burgers, large fries, and a diet coke.
do we leave cars worth thousands of dollars in the friveway and put our useless junk in the garage.
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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 06:57 PM
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Maybe a littel rought, but if I'd rate it 2.5. Everything seems to thin. But hey, idk if that's your style of drawing or not.


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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 07:02 PM
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yea, thats another thing, theres different ways of frawing manga. so ya, idk


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do banks have both doors open and then chain the pens to the counters.
do they have drive-up ATM machines with Braile lettering.
do people order double cheese burgers, large fries, and a diet coke.
do we leave cars worth thousands of dollars in the friveway and put our useless junk in the garage.
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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 07:21 PM
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I voted 3/5...

It may just be me, but I really don't like the style, but despite that, they're really detailed and good looking. The hands are a bit...pudgy too. happy.gif

Keep it up, it's good stuff as far as I can tell.
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Posted on Aug 7 2009, 11:07 PM
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I voted 2/5, because 5/5 would be the best Manga pieces ever, 4/5 would be the decent pieces, 3/5 crappy Manga pieces, of course those are if they were done by professionals, and you're not a professional, at least judged from that work.

2/5. happy.gif


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Posted on Aug 8 2009, 12:11 PM
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damn, DP, wow..
dont worry OB you'll get better ^.^
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do people order double cheese burgers, large fries, and a diet coke.
do we leave cars worth thousands of dollars in the friveway and put our useless junk in the garage.
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Posted on Aug 8 2009, 12:25 PM
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I like the first and the second...and the concept of the fourth, but that might be because of me loving bow and arrows...and the element of ice. =b

3/5. Not bad...but... not amazing...


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It's not like they're bad, I just always rate things at a professional level.

For example I wouldn't rate any of my sigs higher than a 5 or 6.


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Posted on Aug 8 2009, 02:11 PM
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8.3/10 - There are many ways to do manga, different forms and what not. These are well done with vivid colors to make the art come to live in a way. However the artwork feels somewhat stiff, like the art was in a fixed position with a lot of sharp angles and not enough curves. Still, this is great and hoping to see more work from you.


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Posted on Aug 9 2009, 11:45 AM
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Lol 3/5
Ya, my art isn't awesome and I myself see room for a lot of improvement still happy.gif;;
Well thanks for you opinions guys! biggrin.gif


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Posted on Aug 9 2009, 12:08 PM
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I think they're really nice, Online Burn. The style is unlike many others, but that gives it an original look that you're not using someone else's style. I expecially like the first one, and the others are really intresting, as well. I didn't exactly vote, but I can tell you that I think they're much nicer than you think I do.
Of course there's always room for more practice, though. And you'll get better, I'm sure.


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Thanks lady wolf, I've never used much reference in my drawings so that's probably why t looks different from other styles... biggrin.gif


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The fact that it looks different is what really looks nice, here.
It looks to have a smooth design to it. I really like them, keep it up, happy.gif


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Im working on another drawing right now, but Its still pretty sketchy, and the lineart isn't done yet... I'll pm it to you if you'd like happy.gif


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I'd like that, thank you. But only if you want to, though, happy.gif
EDIT: It looks really promising, indeed.
I'm not very good at drawing, but I'm good at typing, but I know good artwork when I see it. My brother Tns. King never uses references on his work, and just draws whatever he wants. He's really good. But he's not good at drawing human figures. You've really got it going for yourself, OnlineBurn. happy.gif


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yea, OB, I like these cuase they look like the style of characters of this game for the GBA, but I forgot the name of it. And, yea, I never seen anyone I know draw something like this, so it is something new and different, and I like that.
I never voted btw, so yea


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QUOTE (Keo @ Aug 9 2009, 02:43 PM)
yea, OB, I like these cuase they look like the style of characters of this game for the GBA, but I forgot the name of it. And, yea, I never seen anyone I know draw something like this, so it is something new and different, and I like that.
I never voted btw, so yea

lol whats the game like? I played alot of gba games when I was little so maybe I liked that style and I'm now remembering it xD.


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Far better than I could do, but the faces need a little work... Something's just... Off.
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My biggest gripes are the heads and the hands. The weapons are cool, and the clothing is well done, but THOSE HEADS.....


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Lol, yeah I think I just now got used to drawing heads properly.


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Heres an update for ya =D
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very good. keep up the good work smile.gif


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QUOTE (Aris @ Oct 4 2009, 05:29 PM)
very good. keep up the good work smile.gif

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